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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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come watch with me-- the majestic sun sets quietly with never a whisper of this day's secrets slowly it sucks in its rays and folds itself into the soft green meadows far beyond the wild flowers and the age'd pines coral tinted clouds begin their evening serenade speaking boldly of the fireball's splendor... oh, what have you seen today bright one... be it beauty, be it death new life, love and laughter-- have you seen it all in just one day... soon we will live life again for you in the morrow but tonite we will sleep beneath a comforter of stars and God's own night-light... will you come see with me-- we havent much time the clouds are fading to pink the splendid sun is yawning in color and has but this whisper yet to utter-- "until morning..." says he, as he settles into the hillside to dream... ...did you see! -dgvarner 7-14-02 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Bout time you got yourself back here young lady...and oh by the way? Thanks for the  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always filled with pure imagety, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
come watch with me-- the majestic sun sets quietly with never a whisper of this day's secrets slowly it sucks in its rays and folds itself into the soft green meadows far beyond the wild flowers and the age'd pines coral tinted clouds begin their evening serenade speaking boldly of the fireball's splendor... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is splendid writing! Completely dazzles the senses. Deb |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ahhhh how ive missed reading you, wonderful done as always  ((hugs)) Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SUNSHINE..thanks for taking notice of me!  NOAH..glad you liked..thanks! BLOOMINGROSE..thanks for the great compliment! LONER_23..thank you much! CHARISMA..oh how i've missed being here!! thanks! glad you enjoyed hugs, g |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hey you.... what a beautiful and enchanting write. Its so nice to see your pen and what a pen it is. You got out the rainbow ink for this. Parker |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
 glad to read something from you at last! come watch with me-- the majestic sun sets quietly with never a whisper of this day's secrets slowly it sucks in its rays and folds itself into the soft green meadows far beyond the wild flowers and the age'd pines coral tinted clouds begin their evening serenade speaking boldly of the fireball's splendor... awesome description here! i never thought of clouds as "coral tinted"..yet what an appropriate description this is... hope you will stay here a while..  |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah PARKER..i had to post poetry to hear from you? lol ..thank you love..glad youre still reading..  KAILE..many thanks..! its good to be back for a bit..! we'll see how long the muse sits in ... hugs, g |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I've always been around sweets. Just off in my own space but always keep a watchful eye for your stuff. I like to read it aloud, it just seems to roll nicely off the tongue. |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Gale, Welcome back, my friend! We've missed you! It's good to see you writing again... and what a comeback! Beautiful descriptive prose and powerful imagery - and the title is perfect! Don't be a stranger, call me...write me...chats with ya soon - Jeff |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You may not get paid to write my friend, but this one proves that you should! This one is indeed a keeper, a wonderful write!Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Such a beautiful and unique description of the sunset. Such gentle kindness. Just Wow! Shenachie |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
DGV, this is truly one of the most beautiful and descript sunsets I have ever had the pleasure to read. Mother nature is blessed to be seen through your eyes. Good to see your words again. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..always good to have my poems read aloud by you .. RASCAL..good to be missed! thank you--glad you enjoyed! EAGLE..now thats a serious compliment my friend...thank you much! SHENACHIE & GENTLE SPIRIT..thank you, THANK YOU! i found this sunset while driving down a long stretch of road wishing my honey, whom i'd just left at work at the fire station, was watching it with me.. ego boosting comments!! wow..thanks again..bunches! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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