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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-17 10:55 AM



I have eyes that see
more than is there.
Colors blind me,
leaving a broken shadow
outlined in you.
I imagine understanding,
feel the warmth of a new day,
favor the mirrored me,
feeling unlimited this morning
looking towards the beauty of
a summer daydream.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-17 12:02 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
2 posted 2002-07-17 01:31 PM


Very nice,
Seeing things that are not there
To some is delusional
For you it’s just insightful poetry

Gloom

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3 posted 2002-07-17 01:36 PM




(smiles) Oh Maureen, I just love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, may you always have the sweetest daydreas and find treasures in every today! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
4 posted 2002-07-17 03:05 PM


To be free to enjoy a beautiful day is indeed...joy at it's best.
Enjoyed!

Deb

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
5 posted 2002-07-17 04:22 PM


Leaving a broken shadow... wow!  I enjoyed reading this...

Neeraja

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