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Charisma
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0 posted 2002-07-17 10:19 AM






Irresistible

Golden Reflections
Flirts with ocean's tidal waves
Shimmer harmonized
With irresistible joy
Mirror of sunset's delight


~*Theresia~*  

© Copyright 2002 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2002-07-17 10:21 AM



You ARE the Mistress of Tanka
and you have been missed...

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-07-17 10:40 AM


Charisma,
Welcome back, I've missed the beauty of your work.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-07-17 10:42 AM


beautiful images in the picture - beautiful images in the poem - evokes wonderful feelings and thoughts - thanks for the lovely poem and picture - Paul
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4 posted 2002-07-17 12:41 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me smile, this is dazzling, ooooohhhhh...I've missed you so much! (kiss on cheek) The picture is golden and breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-17-2002 11:48 PM).]

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-07-17 12:42 PM


I love the imagery. it is so beautiful. The pic fits well.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2002-07-17 06:35 PM



So glad to see you pop in now and than Charisma, we (I) miss you dearly lady.

Again you brought us beautiful words and pic.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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7 posted 2002-07-17 10:25 PM


What an incredible photo, and your words went with it to perfection.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-07-17 11:07 PM


This is a beautiful tanka.
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9 posted 2002-07-18 01:39 AM


Very, very awesome!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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10 posted 2002-07-18 02:45 AM


mmmmmm always awesome

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards,

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2002-07-18 07:25 AM


A wonderfully picturesque Tanka Charisma ... very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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12 posted 2002-07-18 04:28 PM


now these. . . I have missed my friend. . . good to see them again. . .



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BloomingRose
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13 posted 2002-07-18 04:31 PM


Beautifully written. Just love the imagery of it all!

Deb

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14 posted 2002-07-19 12:46 PM


lovely words to go with  your picture..I love tankas..
*s
M

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15 posted 2002-07-19 02:39 AM


Fantassssssssstic!!
Charisma sweetie, I just love coming across these tanka gems that you share share with us...
Hugs2uDearPoetFriend...
*~coco~*

Mark Bohannan
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16 posted 2002-07-19 09:54 AM


You and your Tankas are what are hard to resist.  Beautiful images you paint straight your pen of golden delight.
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17 posted 2002-07-19 10:33 AM


enjoy
Charisma
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18 posted 2002-07-19 04:03 PM


Thank you dear friends for your wonderful replies, it such a treat to have them from you...and know that they are all highly appreciated by me

((warm hugs))

Charisma

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19 posted 2002-07-19 06:51 PM


LovelyLovelyCharisma~

Yes ... this is the PERFECT poetic blend of thought~

You paint the most beautiful word-art~

AND that photo is scrumptious !
I'm just gonna have to swipe it for some 'down the road' inspire~
Love n'hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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