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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-07-17 09:42 AM





This Moment, So Intimate

Hearts whisper in the dark
loving tones soothe
releasing more
than what the body needs~
surpassing what the soul desires.

Entwined in rythmic thoughts
time of tender    savored
engraved on eternal walls
of memories.

Lovers heat burns
lighting hearts of passion,
touching
more than just mere
serendipitous pleasures
each second spent in cherish~

this moment, so intimate

when two hearts
lie together cradled
in the haven
of our love....

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-17-2002 10:05 AM).]

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-07-17 09:45 AM


Donna...perfectly beautiful..
so tender and full of love..
My how I enjoyed this romantic morning read.
~Hugs~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-07-17 09:46 AM


Oh it was gone for a sec but back now..
too pretty for you to take it away...
Again, lovely thoughts here.




[This message has been edited by Enchantress (07-17-2002 09:51 AM).]

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-07-17 09:51 AM


Yo Gentle one....this is borderline "Adult" if ya gotta mind like mine....superbly done...
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-07-17 10:00 AM


Nancy, just a morning gliche, thanks.  Your so sweet, hugs to you!

Well Toe,lets just hope that "softly sensual" will be permissable....but if it need be moved then that's just alright too!
Thanks much.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-07-17 10:09 AM


ms donna..

toerag is right..
but so is the poem
it is tight right babe..

dug it

Kethry
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6 posted 2002-07-17 10:14 AM


Beautiful, sensual write but sooo classy.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Goodknight
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7 posted 2002-07-17 10:49 AM


yes I agree - beautiful - sensual - intimate - evokes all kinds of wonderful thoughts and feelings - great write - Paul
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8 posted 2002-07-17 01:45 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love your tender romantic reads, sweet friend, this one is another true gem, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

devina
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9 posted 2002-07-17 02:46 PM


Now you force me to find you out in open!!! Loved this btw...

but? miss your shine in adult too...

pouting me....

ok...and a grin...

~hugs lady!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Neeraja
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10 posted 2002-07-17 04:32 PM


Impressive... Rich and full... I enjoyed this poem a lot!

Neeraja

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11 posted 2002-07-17 05:03 PM


D~

this is just so lovely....you are growing butterfly....it shows....


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Charisma
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12 posted 2002-07-17 05:16 PM


Like it a lot

Charisma

SmartChick
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13 posted 2002-07-17 05:22 PM


A beautiful poem, indeed.
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14 posted 2002-07-17 06:06 PM


"each second spent in cherish~"

This is excellent, Donna.

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15 posted 2002-07-17 08:36 PM


Beautiful words and thoughts
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16 posted 2002-07-17 08:58 PM


Gentle Spirit, this is so sensually lovely...

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-07-17 09:13 PM


Entwined in rythmic thoughts
time of tender    savored
engraved on eternal walls
of memories.

Sensual and tender...the combination every woman dreams of.
~ dreamy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

texasrose
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18 posted 2002-07-18 01:48 PM


Beautiful and intimate.  Touching.
sigheyes
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19 posted 2002-07-19 06:23 AM


This is a lovely invite to see a part of hearts shared by two.  Sensuality encompassed in love.  Splendid piece.
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
20 posted 2002-07-19 09:16 AM


Hearts whisper in the dark
loving tones soothe
releasing more
than what the body needs~
surpassing what the soul desires.

Entwined in rythmic thoughts
time of tender    savored
engraved on eternal walls
of memories
===================

Quick to realize the beauty of familiarity in this one.  So true are your words and your verse spills these thoughts to us in smooth flow of calming assurance.  The whole piece reads like shared whispers meant for only two and is beautiful in presentation as well as thought.  

Gentle Spirit
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21 posted 2002-07-19 06:35 PM


DS, glad you dug the tight.  Thanks.

Kethry, thanks for the classy.  Appreciate it much.

Paul, so glad you could feel the words.

Noah, thanks for loving romantic-
sometimes I just have to write what I feel.

Tanya, lol..I han out here alot, but when the mood hits..
hey thanks for getting rid of that pout and smiling.  Hugs.

neeraja, wow, thanks for the impressive!

Luaren, you make my heart smile.

Charisma, glad that you enjoyed.

SC, thank you.  

Michael, dear friend, thank you for the kind comments.

Paul, glad you enjoyed the thoughts.

MC, thank you for the lovely.

Lrya~  may every womans dreams come ture.  He has
indeed touched my life more than I can say.

Rose, your thoughts are so appreciated.

SE, thank you, the sharing is beautiful.

Mark~  calm assurance~  THAT'S it exactly!
Such a calming feeling it is...thank you.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


texasrose
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22 posted 2002-07-30 09:03 PM


A second read and still no words can do this justice.  Library

[This message has been edited by texasrose (07-30-2002 09:06 PM).]

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