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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 2002-07-16 04:47 PM



Will you
forget your name
In the presence of my secret garden?

When I
get inside
Will you wonder just how I got in?

I know
What you’re thinkin’
And you want to know how this started.

But I
can’t define
everything that I know has parted.

There’s pain inside that’s waiting
For me its all too late
I’m overrun with hating
I need for you to relate
There’s too much come to ending
The colors fading fast
Still I’ve no use pretending
I forgot the past

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-16 04:47 PM


Very interesting

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-16 06:29 PM


Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it muchly.
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3 posted 2002-07-16 06:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is sooooo powerfully emotional, sweet friend, I too have had much pain in the past so I just want to forget it all myself, this is a positive way of looking at the situation, go forward and keep your spirits up, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-07-16 06:36 PM


You can forget the past, my good friend - time erases bitterness and hate, which in themselves are a destructive force.  There is absolutely nothing we can do about the past, a year ago, a week ago, or even a minute ago, but we have the power to change the future, the next minute, the next week, the next year.  Go on, change it!!   I dare you!
Nice words and thank you.
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

Wobbly Head Bob
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5 posted 2002-07-17 01:16 AM


Thanks all for your replies!  

Just remember without the past there is no future.  Without a stumble is the trip even worth it?  Thanks again!!!

Wobbly Head Bob
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6 posted 2002-07-17 01:17 AM


Thanks all for your replies!  

Just remember without the past there is no future.  Without a stumble is the trip even worth it?  Thanks again!!!

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2002-07-18 02:32 AM


When I
get inside
Will you wonder just how I got in?

What a nice poem this was, so many good thoughts to ponder!  Enjoyed the read very much~

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