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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-07-16 02:38 PM




I don’t need
this calendar of tears
to tell me
that it’s almost
one summer later
since you left…

While I am still caught
in the pain
of missing you…

Knowing…

that the wind
will be
my only touch…

this Summer…



© Copyright 2002 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-16 03:03 PM


Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-07-16 03:15 PM


This is so beautifully and sensitively expressed, Neeraja...
It reminds me of how I felt after my first husband's death.
~ hopeful hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-07-16 03:23 PM



You write of desires
leaves one feeling the ache
Neeraja...
you have my hopes for a
turn around the corner, soon...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-07-16 06:29 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and the love you miss and the desire for summer to bloom with flowers once more! (sigh) My heart goes out to you and I dream this magic for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-07-16 07:08 PM


This is so sad, but beautifully written.
Balladeer
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6 posted 2002-07-16 08:46 PM


Such a melancholy touch....
Goodknight
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7 posted 2002-07-16 08:49 PM


my heart ached as I read this beautifully written poem - thanks Neeraja
Neeraja
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8 posted 2002-07-19 02:45 PM


Thanks again for all your support and comments!!!

I love you all!!!

                  

Neeraja

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