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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-16 02:12 PM

If You Should Go

My love is never ending,
takes me through each night.
If heart be torn, I still will rise
to capture mornings light.

I've much within that tenders me
all bookmarked come your read,
a season full, an abstract mind
a soul from which I bleed.

If you should go, and take your words
and leave me far behind,
my footsteps, you shall ever hear
determined, I'm, you'll find.

My love will stretch, will touch you there,
and there and one more time.
It is far reaching in its hold
extending in its rhyme.

If you should go, and disappear
abandon passions' will,
my heart will mourn each coming day
until its beat runs still.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-16-2002 02:30 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-16 03:04 PM

I really enjoyed. Good expression.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Music Maker
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 152
THE ORIGINAL !!!!

2 posted 2002-07-16 03:14 PM

Yet another lovely one! I think you must use a fountain pen, your poetry just gushes out in melodic symphony. I hope it never runs dry.
Thank you.
Kind thoughts
John XX

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-07-16 03:17 PM

My love will stretch, will touch you there,
and there and one more time.
It is far reaching in its hold
extending in its rhyme.

Beautifully romantic and perfectly written, Maureen.

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-07-16 05:53 PM

the_loner_23 ..thank you, you seam to be my biggest fan  and I appreciate you taking the time to  respond
hugss
M

MM...nope no pen and I can barely sing a note on key  lately (I have had this awful cough for almost a year...is  slowly clearing up though) Thank you John for reading and responding in such a Knightly way.

MM, too (I use to be MMoonchild)

Lyra, I try to write the truth of my  feelings...it's nice when someone appreciates the written word *s
many hugss of wellness
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-16-2002 05:58 PM).]

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