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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-07-16 12:59 PM

She stands upright in walking death,
Eyes blind to the living and cast aside,
Her heart still beats and she takes breath,
But the soul’s feelings is gone off to hide.

Her steps move her across the street,
To where some man then takes her for a ride
She takes breath and her heart will beat,
But there is no touching the cold inside.

Rumpled, bruise, tattered and now ripped,
One foot before the other carries on,
Body forgot and mind rough stripped,
What will be will be and what done is done.

Cluttered room on dirty mattress,
She mingles her blood with insanity
And rides deeper into darkness
And further away from reality.

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (07-16-2002 01:01 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-07-16 01:03 PM

I have never been exposed to that part of life..only on tv and don't know if I could describe it as well as you do..

M

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-07-16 01:06 PM

"She mingles her blood with insanity
And rides deeper into darkness
And further away from reality"

Um...and this is BAD thing, right?

grin.

(serenity exits...taking notes...

)

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2002-07-16 01:07 PM

Thank you, Nakdthought,
Pleased you like my humble words,
All I have to do to be inspired in this way is to look out the window,
One of the advantages of living in the big city.

Gloom

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2002-07-16 01:10 PM

Thank you, Serenity,
I guess it depends on the person,
Most would think it not the best of lives,
But whom am I to judge.
I just watch young women addict themselves to heroin
And waste away to empty shells.
I can think of better ways to escape.

Gloom

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2002-07-16 01:14 PM

hey babe, ME TOO.

I know. Some times levity beats the hell outta reality. Makes it hard to place a bet, yanno?

hugs.

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

6 posted 2002-07-16 01:47 PM

I know the riders of this horse, Professor...
and I know the horse, as well...

[This message has been edited by Elan (07-16-2002 01:48 PM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2002-07-16 02:14 PM

Elan? IT'S A BAD BET. The Game is "fixed" luv.

sighs and hugs.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2002-07-19 10:15 AM

I know this world well...
You wrote it well
~~ Connie ~~

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