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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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rain said "hello" to the red hand man A talcom hand twined with the sands from deserts dwellen land. Ruminating, my heart and mind, stunned, and glowing deep behind my aching chest. For pleading of rest has brought a simple time worth troubles set aside. ...And taken by a nimble sky to waters crest and oceans tide, I've turned to cradle in my eye the dusks enduring ever bride. the day time as she blinks our eyes. Kindly, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
can I dance with you, said the unexpected sunbeam? grin... I hope, and intend to sit back and watch you dazzle, lady... (teach me, to think like this? I keep trying to clap with one hand, but this damned tree keeps falling in the wood, when no one is around!) damn...HEARD THAT?  LOVE YOU... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
back to top with you---grin giggly* rain does not just "say" here...it tackles you...and says, "HOW THE HELL ARE YA?" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For pleading of rest has brought a simple time worth troubles set aside. if only I could do this... nice to see your words again *s M |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh goodie!!! *insert silly jumping up and down here* here's another one. . . just what I needed today. . . a bit of whimsy and unthought to make the day inspire. . . woo hoo!!!  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Mmm... how ah do love ah good rain poem. She said burn ... together. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, oh my gosh, I love the cryptic and mysterious style of your words, sweet friend, this is strikingly wonderful, I love reading your words again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amelia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-16-2002 06:25 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A talcom hand twined with the sands from deserts dwellen land. Ruminating, my heart and mind, ============================= And taken by a nimble sky to waters crest and oceans tide, I've turned to cradle in my eye the dusks enduring ever bride. ====================== Your gift of imagery and personification is always impressive .... you write with color and texture and a tight, succinctity that makes your poetry so uniquely you. So good to find you here in poetry land again Poetess Amelia. How she loves me, I dont understand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeartAngryBraids~ Why even your ID name is poetry ! I LOVE typing it~  '...And taken by a nimble sky to waters crest and oceans tide, I've turned to cradle in my eye the dusks enduring ever bride.' I truly hope you enjoy being back here as much as I love having you back ! If that's the case ... there are at least TWO of us happy this day !  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Amelia, thrilled that you have (finally!) posted..hope that you will stay here a while... as usual, i am impressed at how your seemingly nonsensical words make poetry in my head...brilliant! will keep this in my library since i bet this will take me in different directions the next time i read it... |
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