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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-07-16 01:56 AM


second day blue-eyes
unsteady gaze at daddy
arms- unsteady nest

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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doreen peri
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1 posted 2002-07-16 02:12 AM


first day green stare,
ready, she glares in his eyes,
heart reflected in

brian sites
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2 posted 2002-07-16 02:19 AM


thanks doreen
did this drag an old one out?
or bring about a new one?
twas good nevertheless
BS.

doreen peri
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3 posted 2002-07-16 03:38 PM


a new one spontaneously responding to yours...

thanks for letting me tag on..

i like it when others inspire me and if you ever want to write spontaneously in reply to my work, i'd enjoy that, as well.....

loved your haiku

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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-07-16 09:01 PM



tiny fists balling
letting wail loose he rushes
she grasps his finger

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5 posted 2002-07-17 12:17 PM


thanks sunshine.
babies abounding!
BS.

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