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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-07-16 12:25 PM


I put my headphones on
I find my favorite song--
I whisper rocking in the tune--
praying one half moon to full...
I take myself down off the shelf--
dust of me is glittered self
as I spin myself awake
as I keep the human daze...

There is nothing, none can do.
To stop the music, stop the tune.
Mathematics, rhythmatized...
I spin in tune--I'm realized.
I'll reverse the universe--
I'll dance and sing until the curse
is set within a stone's agree--
music, is myself...set free.

© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-16 12:26 PM


I like it. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Temptress
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2 posted 2002-07-16 12:30 PM


exactly
*sighing*
Lovely..just utterly lovely...

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Martie
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3 posted 2002-07-16 12:53 PM


To dance is to set the spirit free, for me.  Love the feeling that sings in this.  PS..enjoyed your driveway story..thanks.  
Duncan
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4 posted 2002-07-16 01:11 AM


music, is myself...set free.

Damn, where did I put my headphones?  Could see ya dancin' there, K.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2002-07-16 03:46 AM


I'll reverse the universe--
=========================
I believe you just did.  Music will definitely do it for ya.

wranx
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6 posted 2002-07-16 08:13 AM


Yes, yes, yes!

You too, dissolve, revolve within a rhythm.

~wranx

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-07-16 08:48 AM


Dang!  How I love music ..
And I love this!
~Hugs~

Lighthousebob
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8 posted 2002-07-16 12:30 PM



Rock on!!!



-Bob

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9 posted 2002-07-16 12:34 PM


Serenity~

'I whisper rocking in the tune--
praying one half moon to full...
I take myself down off the shelf--
dust of me is glittered self'


LOVE the thought of your 'glittered self'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2002-07-16 12:36 PM



No WONDER I'm dizzy!

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-07-16 12:55 PM


Mathematics, rhythmatized...
I spin in tune--I'm realized.
I'll reverse the universe--
I'll dance and sing until the curse
is set within a stone's agree--
music, is myself...set free.

I like your idea of music, Karen...
and of course, your poem.
~ musical hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2002-07-16 01:41 PM


smiling thanks to all--the title was a toss up---I decided on "a stone's agree" because I figured the title "Keith Richards Nods" could be construed as "drug" title...grin..

am I bad? I YAM.

(BUT NOT AS BAD AS KEITH...Ain't that right, buddy...er..keith? KEITH? WAKE UP!! )



thanks guys.

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