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Friendships Chain my second anniversary at PiP’s a shape poem
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Friendships Chain my second anniversary at PiP’s a shape poem |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Friendships Chain Circles linked together make a chain. Hearts bound together keep off the rain. Even when truth hurts a little too much. Truth is always better than liars touch. The rain that falls clears away The drear. Sometimes sight Needs the aid of a tear We don’t always see the truth we need. And to our friends we don’t always take heed. Life goes on, the river of time flows by. It has sunlight’s laughter and tears to cry. But no matter what the links hold true. We are bound together and we’ll get through. Linked as sisters we walk to our fate. Through the dark heading to freedom’s gate. Truth and unity we march on as one. Onwards and upwards to love’s shining sun. The unbroken circle a symbol to me. Of unending friendship linked eternally. Link the circles into a chain of hope each circle separate but together a rope. Hearts and souls bound into a chain. Which carries strength and banishes pain. Join in the circle give me your hand. And rejoice in friendships happy band. Marsha With love and warm stuff to those that I love and those that love me, and to those that love those who love me This is a little late but I hope you’ll forgive me xx my second anniversary at PiP’s Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (07-17-2002 12:13 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That is so cool. Enjoyed! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How incredibly beautiful, Mushy!!! Congrats on your second anniversary!!  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Hey, I'm glad you brought it back again, Marsha... after I replied to it before, it got deleted. I just wanted to tell you how absolutely magnificent this poem is... The words as well as that dramatic presentation. Its absolutely awesome! It looks like a lot of work went into this one. Congratulations on 2 years here.  ~ congratulatory hugsLyra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now you KNOW I'm smiling... and you very well know why! Congratulations...two years already... where DID the time go? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh Marsha, I'm so happy you put this up again, sweet friend, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 2ND YEAR ANNIERSARY HERE, WE ARE ALL SOOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU!!! (kiss on cheek) Your contributions and love to this family is many, sweet friend, God Bless You all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thaank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hiya, Lovely Poetess Lady.. I really enjoyed the shape of this and the colors.  Simply beautiful. *jenn* I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
last night I noticed you had deleted something..if this was it, I am also glad you brought it back..the presentation is wonderful, and the words caring truths... love it a wish for many more happy days to share on here hugssss M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marsha, this is so beautiful! You do these shape poems so well. Happy 2nd Anniversary! You are such a joy to have here! ~Luv & Hugs~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The coolest I've seen of late!  Hugs, Deb |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
S'pose that means I have to buy you a present. Well if I must I must... how about a pendant to go on your chain. Don't be impatient it's coming. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I Am Here So are You. Love Flows out in Me and you, join Me now and let us Soar two years on and Still there's more. Love My love you carry on Married to this Passionate song Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Marsha... in both form and content. *S* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Bravo Marsha, and what a way to celebrate your 2e year. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is a very clever presentation of a poem full of substance - congratulations on your 2nd year - love you poetry and your loving replies - Paul |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ You little scamp ! and YOU want to watch ME ??? LOL ! This is utterly, utterly MAHVALOUS and you darned well know it ! I kept looking for EXCEDRIN to be stamped across the center of one of them ... guess you took them all !!!  You KNOW that I utterly, utterly adore the entire presentation .... and of course I love you and your friendship so much~ Two years ... seems a lifetime of warm, lovely friendship to me~  Just you wait until September ... (I've got you a little 'pressie' ) SEE ... it's contagious !!! Tee-Hee ! I'm so proud of you !!!! Love n' hugs across the water, sweet sister~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Happy Happy on birthday #2 !!! |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Marsha, the words and shape are so lovely. It's a wonderful tribute you've given yourself on your 2nd anniversary with PiP. mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 You have put your heart and soul into your posts and comments to folks and we love you for it Marsha, Happy 2nd Anniversary. Getting close to September, whoo hooo! This was fantastic by the way. Nothing means more to me than faith, |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Congrats to you lady!!! and? You are simply ADORED here!!! but I think you know that!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, I peeked at your cheat sheet. Dang I started to get queezy. That took much patience...or was it love. Talent for sure! I don't know which to praise more the poem or the presentation. Or maybe your friendship. Oh...I can't forget your two years! It's all so overwhelming and AWESOME!!! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
I put my hands together for this! Wonderfully done! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, I am always late!!! But the thoughts are there in my CONGRATULATIONS, and it is such a pleasure to read your writings!!! Great job, sis!!! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Marsha...this is really cool....I liked all of it, including the format.....nice job |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
Congratulations!!! Dear Mushy Marsha, the greetings come from near and far (mine are near - I was a 'Chatham Man' in the RN!!). Gosh - I don't know if you are a two fingered typist, like me, but I really think you must have put a lot of time in doing this one - not only in the verse, but in the pictographics (if there is such a word!!) Well Done Fair Maiden!!! Kind thoughts John XX Grass won't grow under feet that don't move. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Happy Anniversary, Bubbles... |
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