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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-07-15 02:47 PM


A Concert Of Delight
~*~
As the moon slips into gray
sequins of sunrise mesmerize
as merging droplets of moon
charm whispers into swoon
a kiss in the morning dew
is harmonized in a concert of delight
as the envelope of a cherished dream
is opened by you


BloomingRose




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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-15 02:51 PM


That is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-15 08:37 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and my each morning bathe you with light and make you smile knowing that dream came true! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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3 posted 2002-07-15 08:45 PM


back to back lovely poems by you - thanks for contributing such beauty to my evening reading - very well written and evokes lots of feelings - thanks Paul
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-07-15 10:02 PM


very lovely words...
~smiling~ at the pictures in my mind
M

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-07-15 10:27 PM


As the moon slips into gray
sequins of sunrise mesmerize

Beautiful, artistic imagery, Debra
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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