»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
useless trick
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
useless trick |
|
|
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
|
useless trick I hear a solid a liquid a gas just now in my half muffled head on this down pillowed nakedness as I am trying to think up a dream to find you in. I hear them all strained through my screen window a sometimes street lullaby or by the crickets later in their incessant throbbing rhythm no poet ever matched. I could wait for the midnight freight and pass the time trying to conjure up some useless trick that won’t fix this in my memory ‘till morning or I’ll have to turn on the light and write this down dead. © 071402 "Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor." e |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You know..I have found that you cannot force a dream...it just happens... And, I always have pad and pencil beside my bed...  ..just in case!Excellent thoughts described through brilliant imagery....enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krawdad Enjoyed and the choice is yours. |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, to will a dream! Much easier said, then done... |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad You have brought the night and a searching to life with this poem. Listen to the crickets...they know where to find dreams. |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) I agree, just ease your mind and think happy thoughts and the dreams will just come to you and there you will always have the paper to write them away on! (big hugggssssss) I have dreams all the time and I always love writing them when I wake up or in the middle of the night, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
There is that transition time between the daily consciousness and the rest . . . Thank you for your comments. |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and then again.... smiles to e... there is always LUCID dreaming... loved this. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
