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Dreams Untold ... co written with Dee
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Dreams Untold ... co written with Dee |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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 Dreams Untold With that distant look A story is told Of hopes within And dreams untold Lips slightly apart And a hint of smile Forever etched upon Those hearts beguiled Lost in contemplation Immune to autumn chill Weathered line of face Mirrored in sandstone sill Dreams lost within The faded russet hue Of times indistinct Neither gold or blue Serenely beautiful A lady of class Eternally distant Encased in glass Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh yes!!!!!!! A duet between two of my favorite poets and a piece of beauty regardless. Split rhyme captured in preciseness, line splits nailed, and imagery galore, not to mention that you can't even tell who wrote what verse. Now that glows in the light of great poetry. Excellent you two. Good thing she finihed THIS duet first ... (right Eagle)  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good to see you, Sir... a beautiful collaboration.... welcome home! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eddie, wonderful to see you again! A beautiful duet...enjoyed so much! ~Welcome home hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lost in contemplation Immune to autumn chill Weathered line of face Mirrored in sandstone sill Dreams lost within The faded russet hue Of times indistinct Neither gold or blue Serenely beautiful A lady of class Eternally distant Encased in glass =============================== Well it twas worth the wait ... One cant rush diamonds, right Eddie I love the imagery of this piece the way you used texture and color to paint the scene and theme of this melting of the muses ....very cool pic too... Miss Dee is finding some wonderful inspire in mythology these days,  Great job you two .. please do-duet somemore mothyme Now for me some words come easy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Needed a duet for lunch and this seemed like the PERFECT item on the menu. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EagleOne To both of you, well done. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh my this is wonderful! Fits perfectly with the picture. Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh Eddie and Dee, this is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, you depict the grace of a woman soooooo wonderfully here, I LOVE IT, this is indeed divine and elegant in poetry, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Eddie and Dee thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Ok I'm gonna try again cause I lost it thee first time I tried to reply to everyone James, thank you. Glad you liked it. Mark, it got to the point we don't really remember who wrote what Thanks for stopping in. Oh and by the way I have a verse to send to someone, I just forgot to bring it with me today.Sunshine, it is good to have him back posting isn't it? Enchantress, thank you. I am pleased you enjoyed it. Janet, lots of good things take time, just like Eagles poetry I am a bit preoccupied with mythology lately aren't i? Thanks mothy one.Mark, lunch? Hope you enjoyed it. Sy, thanks for stopping in. It pleases me to know you like it. Deb, the painting was the inspiration for the poem. I saw it and had to write about it, with Eddie's help of course. Noah, it always makes me smile to see your name under one of my poems. Thank you for your wonderful replies. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Dee...thanks for bringing him home! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, my friend, thank you so much for giving me the chance to duet with you. I hope my taking so long doesn't mean that this is the first and last time. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Oh so lovely!!!! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
James ~ always good to have you stop by, thank you Mark ~ it must be a long list if I’m on it! I’m not sure if it’s just women or the poetry you can’t rush! Now having said that I think I’ll find a nice quiet corner to hide in for a while! Sunshine ~ its good to have the chance to stop in for a while. Enchantress ~ Asalways, its good to know you enjoyed. Janet ~ well you do know how patient I can be in needed , and yes I too think it was worth the wait.Mark ~ how do I find a job where you get a lunch break? lol. Seymour ~ Thank you, it is an honour to have you think so. Deb ~ thanks, as Dee says, it was the inspiration for the work.Noah ~ always a pleasure, thank you. Sunshine ~ A definition from a dictionary says, Home: “An environment offering security and happiness.” “A valued place regarded as a refuge or place of origin”. Ya know I’ve never been away, least ways not in my heart, thanks again for the welcome back. Dee ~ Well I certainly hope not my friend, I thank you for the challenge and the opportunity. mycafe ~ Glad you enjoyed, thank you! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
much enjoyed! good to be skipping through and find such enjoyable reading... great duet'ing!! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Astonishingly Beautiful -Truly ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Nice to see you dg, skip by any time I really enjoyed doing this with Eddie and hope that there will be more. (I see you shudder there Eddie )Rayne, thank you. Glad you liked it. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dee and Eddie A wonderful collaboration...very much enjoyed! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thank you friends, it is good to know you enjoyed! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Excuse me, Mr EagleOne  I think you should find a quiet corner! D Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Just found this, I guess the Dee jumped out at me. Hiding behind some ozzi bushes I guess I must say a great duet, a beauty of a write. the last line just finishes it perfectly I must say. Parker [This message has been edited by Parker (08-01-2002 02:07 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow, I am envious.....very well done. Hats off to both of you.... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is just lovely....wow what a duet...great job you two... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Park, good to see you. Glad you found this one. Magnus, thanks. I think Eddie will tell you not to be too envious, I take forever to duet with. Lauren, good to see you. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks all, Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
Dreams lost within The faded russet hue Of times indistinct Neither gold or blue Serenely beautiful A lady of class Eternally distant Encased in glass how beautiful two voices here sing....melding as one Wonderful collaboration.... Sammie ^i^ |
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