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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-15 03:06 AM


To Daniel-

The stars walk hand in hand
teddy bear and honey sit on the shore
as the waves crash against the beach
under the moonlight
they watch the stars dance
hand in hand they danced

Teddy bear and honey tried their fate
their eyes meet without a flicker
their lips touch
fingers dance hand in hand
their love is so great they could hardly bear(sp?)
for teddy bear wants his honey more and more
and honey not much sweeter than sugar
gives her teddy bear a squizzer

definition of squizzer- A tickle on the lower part of the body. created to rhyme with sugar.



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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-07-15 06:32 PM


Cute write, it was spun sugar not done with a luger, it didn't make me howl, nice laid on with a trowel.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-15 06:34 PM


Very cute

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-07-15 10:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, may you forever find honey of joy in love and hold your loves dreams close like that teddy bear, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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