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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-07-15 01:37 AM


Waving a sorcerers wand
whirling in the wind
surreal and sublime
tapping into my mind
enchanting illusions
of love transpires
a strange magic
stirs in the air
casting a spell
that hypnotizes
entranced by the rapture
and the look in your eyes...

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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-07-15 02:05 AM


a strange magic
stirs in the air
casting a spell
that hypnotizes
entranced by the rapture
and the look in your eyes...

I've been in that parking lot.  Exactly!  Nothing but magic can explain it.

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-07-15 03:02 AM


Thanks Duncan~ wigglin' my eyebrows!  
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-07-15 06:32 AM


ms bluezy....
enjoyed this little package
cool stuff babe

Neeraja
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4 posted 2002-07-15 07:19 AM


Enjoyed this!!

Neeraja

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-07-15 08:57 AM


Abracadabra!  Enjoyed this Lori!
Of course the title pulled me in
Lovely write!
~Hugs~

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2002-07-15 12:32 PM


Life to prosperity ... lines matched in loving palms of unite
Strolls taken ... in witness to angels along shores of delight
Leaves read through crystal gazes in cups turned midnight
Spheres roll in reflected haze ... offering tomorrows insight


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-07-15 12:35 PM


BluesSerenade
Pretty, enjoyed.

Lady In White
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8 posted 2002-07-15 01:17 PM



What a lovely weave
of magic into smiles...

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-07-15 01:24 PM


Waving a sorcerers wand
whirling in the wind
surreal and sublime

this is truly a magical poem, Lori...
~ magical hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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10 posted 2002-07-15 06:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is one of the shorter ones I've read of yours yet it is just as magical and lovely as always! (kiss on cheek) May your love forever charm you with loves spell, sweet friend, this is transcending with poetic beauty, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
11 posted 2002-07-15 11:31 PM


Dark Stranger~ That little package is a mystery to me!  I'm so glad you liked it~  Thank you

Thank you Neeraja~

Nancy~ I've always been intrigued by a good magic show and the fact that I can't figure it for the life of me!     

Mark~ Oh my, why didn't I think of those crystal gazes..thank you for your magical reply...it is beautiful and put me under all over again!     
I really appreciate it Mark~

Mr. Tabin~ I am so pleased that you did~  Thank you kindly~

Thank you Lady~ I'm happy to know you're smiling with me!

Lyra~  Love is a kind of magic that is full of surprises!      Thank you for your gracious reply and hugs to you~

Noah~ Waaalaaa, I guess it worked!  I'm glad you enjoyed my short form, but I really should try to perfect it a bit more.  
Thanks so much Noah~

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