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One More Tear
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One More Tear |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
one more tear? what does it matter another heart alone in shatter words tipped in arrow’s bane found its mark in me again I thought I had put up the shield closed the door poured cement unyield alas I heard the fatal sigh felt the blow from arrow’s fly then cackle of archer’s voice again I became target of choice |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know how this feels. Enjoyed! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sharon, I know sometimes the arrows don't work out like you hoped they would, but truly there is always one true arrow of love out there that will always lead one to their true love! (sigh) This is powerfully expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the feeling you convey here, PDV... I think we have all felt this way at sometime in our lives.  ~ hugs to heal your heartLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Sharon, this just aches... Good write...very well said. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sharon, this could have been wrote for me. This is exactly how I feel. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
you hit the mark with this one Sharon!! I'm lovin' it!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
WoW, this really hits home. i got goosebumps reading it. i know just what you feel Good luck hunny!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
EXCELLENT writing PDV... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
thank you...I was sad yesterday. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hope yr gladder today. I loved this poem, PdV. And, better yet, understand it. She said burn ... together. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I know the feeling well. Hugs to you. Deb |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have felt those sad days and wonder if I am a target at times, also... well written, PdV I hope you are feeling better today. hugsss M |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I thought I had put up the shield closed the door poured cement unyield Stop, you're scarin' me! Guess, it's a chance we take, huh? One blaze of glory - glory |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh this aches...beautiful penned ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i really love simplicity. Kindly, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've found that you have to move faster than the target. . . hopefully, better today. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
How many tears must we cry ? How many times must our heart be broken ? How many time will love die ? How many words of love have we spoken ? After each heartbreak we have but one thing to look forward to "Happiness" Really enjoyed the poem. |
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