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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-07-14 10:03 PM


Everyone...sometimes is weak.
Everyone...sometimes is lonely.
Every corner of space
Is filled with thoughts bubbles.
Tender yet lonely thoughts
Fly up as steam of heart's fire
Goes up, as tears slid down
On the cheeks.

Everyone...has tender touch.
Everyone...has a key...to the heart.
Even the cruelest one
Has a softer side...human touch.
Tender yet tough
Have us confused.
Sometimes it's tough to forgive,
But if we just look...for that traits...
We will find
The beauty in each of us.

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-14 10:13 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-14 11:24 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eliza, this is so very true, sweet friend, it takes so much to forgive but forgiveness only makes us and the relations with our peers stronger! (sigh) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2002-07-14 11:26 PM


thanks the_loner_23 Thanks for the first one to reply!

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-07-15 04:42 PM


Like these thoughts...James
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5 posted 2002-07-15 04:43 PM



Eliza...thought bubbles...
sparkling imagery...

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