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Marge Tindal
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When the world seems so against you
and you can't tell black from white
If you feel you've lost your way
and nothing is going right~

Take a look around you
gaze at the company you're in
If they're headed a different direction
you may just need to turn around
and follow the lead of friends~

For there is comfort in friendship
that brings us to higher ground
Nothing like friends pulling together
to turn the impossible around~

*One photo ... two thoughts of inspire~

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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 07-14-2002 07:36 PM       View Profile for Titia Geertman   Email Titia Geertman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Titia Geertman's Home Page   View IP for Titia Geertman


You did a great job on your two thoughts sweet Marge.

I really, really love them both

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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2 posted 07-14-2002 07:49 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Margie girl darling heart sister of my soul and writer of life’s truths and wisdom, your thoughts of inspire simply leave me agog. Truly exquisite darling girl. I love what you did with one image, I love it utterly utterly utterly.

Admittedly I love all your writing but, sometimes something especially you pops out the inkwell and these two gems are something very special.

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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Somewhere in time~


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Excellent Margie Gal...
I'm off to find the other thought...
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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For there is comfort in friendship
that brings us to higher ground
Nothing like friends pulling together
to turn the impossible around~


Right on Marge!   This is wonderful!
You're amazing!
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Marge, of the two, this is my favorite, but both are great
Love the photo, too.
Sandra
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6 posted 07-14-2002 10:19 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Marge:  You're right, sometimes we need to go with the flow!  I have this picture on my screensaver.  Loved it when I first saw it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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Marge,
You're pretty smart for your age! Well done as always.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Madame Chipmunk
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I love these black and white creatures, Marge.
I've never seen a zebra in shades of grey...
Are you the one in the middle who is going the wrong way? LOL
~ black and white hugs

Lyra

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown


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Marge, this really shows your talent to be able to use one picture with two thoughts. I love it!
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Amazing Marge, that you've used the same picture and present different perspectives so perfectly well.  I really liked this a LOT!!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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But the view looks exactly the same????? Did the zebras just switch places??? *confused look*

LOL... I couldn't resist. *G*

I enjoyed both poems very much!
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Titia~
Thank you, dear ... just seems that I was no sooner done with one when the other tapped me on the poetic shoulder~

MarshaLove~
Thanks sweetie ... I just have to try to keep doing what I do~
(whatever that is)

Enchantress~
Thanks gal~

ETHome~
You managed to choose my favorite line-of-thought~
Thank you dear~

CatalinaMoon~
Mine too ... thanks dear~

BettyLou~
Now WHY doesn't that surprise me ???
Thanks sweet friend~

Larry~
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
Thanks guy~

Lyra~
That'sa me !!
But, but ... I can be gently persuaded !
Sometimes

SuzieQ~
Thankee gal ... maybe it's just my 'split' poemsanality~

MyCafe~
Thanks girl ... I appreciate you ~

SuthernGal~
Just so you won't feel like the only BLONDE on the planet !

LOL... I couldn't resist. *G*

*HUGS* to all of you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kaile
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Marge,
just read "Dare to be different"..this complements it very well indeed!
congrats on such a creative write!(but then you ARE always creative)
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LOL Too funny

Cold hands means a warm heart

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:-)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



[This message has been edited by suthern (07-16-2002 08:47 AM).]

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I like this poem too - nice contrast with being different - the wonderful energy given to us by the tension that is so well presented in these 2 poems - loved them - Paul
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This is great too!  I like both views! Frienship is such an awesome thing!
Hugs
Cindi
Marge Tindal
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Got the *Suthern* giggles this morning~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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To be foolish, silly, happy
To reply with comebacks snappy
Was that ever really me?
Will that person again be?
Probably not, I'd have to say
But you've brightened up my day!
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 04-23-2006 07:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SweetestSuthernGal~
SEE !!!
I TOLD you I was having a *Suthern* day ...
you flit into my thoughts on the morning rise .. then *RING* goes the phone ...
SURPRISE !
(NOTHING EVER really surprises me anymore !)

It was beautiful talking to you sweets~

Tee-Hee ! ... I WON the Scrabble game ...
(did you have ANY doubt ?)

Now ... what's that *hug* around your neck ?
It's ME !!!

AND ... true friends NEVER get tired of lifting a friend~
Honest Injun !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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