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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Such a magical isle of creation With such southern charm Casting her spell with her eyes Dictating her presence in total charm An efflorescence package of true spirit A captivating aura casting spells Her presence stimulates In eyes that titillate in excitement Sending chills of pleasure within So volatile yet gentle manifestation Of purity unbounded in sensual strength That intoxicates you needing much more In hypnotic trances of her whispers In her movements she imprisons your desires In deep sighs within your cravings Wishing the night to never end But time destroy fantasies Gone, but her images are still implanted within The smile of a fantastic night In her luscious fragrance of arousal My words have exploded in new meanings To try to reinvent the evening of sparkling gems Within a paradise of her choosing Creating a new vocabulary of new stimulations That will set of the fireworks Of cuddles and embraces so tender That the moon shines with a halo As the winds brush our souls In an existence of two joining as one Setting fire to those ruby lips Sending fires into Irish skies Of flaming passion on clover Sending Leprechauns blushing To churn out Rainbows full of treasures Dedicated to a special woman I met who graced me with a night that made me feel exhilerated. D.Lester Young (07/14/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-14-2002 10:16 AM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Oh what a night! and quite a write. Enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...I am listening to "Dance of the Celts" while reading this, and the music playing was "Old Blind Dogs"....just letting you know that the music, the title, the lilt of your piece lent well to the feeling... very good David...very good.... |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Thank you both for your gracious comments. I added a last stanza which may add to the effect or it it might distract from it. What do you think? |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
Wow - Gosh - What a lady!!!! - Please Email her address, at once!!!! A very descriptive write that conjured up pictures in this old mans brain of erotic delights in an age long past. But really, it is not a gentlemanly thing to boast of past liaisons in a forum where my wife is a member. Thank you sir, for rekindling memories. Kind thoughts, John Grass won't grow under feet that don't move. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, yes, I think it adds just the right touch... |
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