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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-07-14 03:45 AM



             Version One

In the winds flying so free
That the words fly onto paper
As notes of intense vibrations
In the music of a new universe

Confidence is created
Inspiring the heavens to glow
Interlocking arms of intense possibilities
Angelic blessings dancing
From profound exhilaration

So my love I write for you
To carry me in utter tenderness
In clouds within creating such softness
That a paradise of feelings will absorb you

In a state of euphoria the thunder will roll
In electrifying illumination
Sending static charge particles of blue ink
On a white stage of cellulose
Charging audiences with new energies

So in the self confidence of success
The elevator music of you next to me
Will carry me to new heights of awareness
Into the explosive fireworks of creation


            Version Two

In the winds flying so free
That the words fly onto paper
As if notes into music
The confidence is created

In new universes of thought
So inspiring that the heavens glow
Wrapping arms of angels around me
The confidence is created

So my love I write for you
To carry me in tenderness
In the clouds of my own mind
The confidence is reassured


D.Lester Young (07/14/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-14-2002 03:51 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-07-14 09:29 AM


Dave, I enjoy your writing, always. This flows with romance.
Sandra

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