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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-14 03:44 AM





cool crystal clear water
the music of waterfalls
rushing poetry
fluid filling yet un-full
as love quenching desire

aloha... with warm regards

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-14 08:08 AM



Tanka very much, Cheryl...

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2 posted 2002-07-14 10:50 AM


Beautifully described and presented in a perfect Tanka.  Love seeing anything about nature that honors her and you did that superbly.
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3 posted 2002-07-14 12:21 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, the picture and this lovely tanka are both enchanting, I love waterfalls so much! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
4 posted 2002-07-14 08:26 PM


Many mahalos!
I appreciate your time to give feedback...

smiles atcha all, Cher

aloha... with warm regards

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