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Where Was It
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Where Was It |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Where Was It Reality is ever taking from this day I'm given I can feel that something has changed Hope lost grip of this so wounded soul And, the breeze just hasn't felt the same... Just where was it I began living on bended knee Down with the power of losing and relying on those winds Just where was is that sacred stopped touching my heart When I was just waiting for understanding to caress my skin... I once had a real place safe within your arms Where you allowed room for comfortable to grow Just where was it that my rain on nights window pane Left no hesitation to just let me go... I'm not sure why the sun isn't meant for me anymore Just where was it that kindness slipped through the doors of regret Maybe it was the hands of another that colored your eyes And, now, I'm just a moment you long to forget... Where was it that you stopped believing in me Just where was it I began believing you did Cause I never knew that side of you To feel I haven't a thing left to give... Just where was it that you started losing faith Where feelings and bad fortune have no place Just where was it that I let you down Where nothing of desirable is found... Just tell me where was it that I lost me Could it be where I used to believe That the world couldn't haunt any season given That I'd ever be alone in this rain I'm living... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Saunni, this feels so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope that now you have found where true happiness exists and now joy always rests there in your heart! (sigh) This is powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
sad yet real poem, hope you do fine true happiness  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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