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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-07-13 08:37 AM

Carbon Copied Plan

Long ago in the dark of right
God wrote out his plan one night
He took a sheet of paper white
while beneath He laid rice paper thin
with carbonated black between
then transliterated His thoughts within

There shall be this one man
Who will be good by My command
He shall be giving of his soul
Peace shall be his guiding goal
And his loving mate shall be
His mirror for all eternity

But such is the way of life
the original went on, one way
the copy beneath, yet another
throughout the planes of time they sought
the sight of the very other
looking to come together yet again

The original document, he took some beating
the rice paper, tho thin, she shed greetings
each knowing they were a wondrous part
of God’s great plan, the plan of heart
each looking for the return to see
an original match to the carboned copy

Soul mates fly, at God’s command
in eternity, shall walk hand in hand

01.05.01
Repost, for Enchantress

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-07-13 08:53 AM

Sunshine
this is carbon based life in it's original form. Excellent
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-07-13 09:15 AM

I must have missed this before...I don't think I was here then..very well done.

*s
M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-07-13 09:22 AM

Soul mates fly, at God’s command
in eternity, shall walk hand in hand
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So beautiful, so true...*happy tears here*
Thank you Sunshine for reposting this for me.
~Hugging you, oh so tight~

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-07-13 05:17 PM

Sunshine: This is a new slant on an old, familiar story. Very refreshing and beautifully done.

Betty Lou Hebert

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2002-07-13 05:41 PM

This is beautiful Karilea ... both in sentiment and form ... just lovely!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

GoddessofHell
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 76

6 posted 2002-07-13 05:45 PM

Beautiful...
Enjoyed very much.

Heather

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2002-07-13 05:45 PM

No words, just feelings of beauty

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-07-13 06:16 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I just love the spiritual and romantic feel of this, this is superb, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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