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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-07-13 04:25 PM

simulation assimilation association
they itch so wonder flea
         my mouth is for catching lies
found in the earth where the moneygrubs  squirm                                              o  n      i             g
no-one could "_(0-0)_ stand" your until it became the
ball b on u the c court n of div)(vforce eading their along the
.:.:.:.:. here lay the peeramiddles of along the way Of tree trunks diamond piny ring
then a parent and language could not have a deferred ad(judicat(ion no mo’ ther’ she blows
to make a long story even ____l_o___________nge______r … you lived
to trip over the ellipses on your way out no matter how many times
you were warned not to make a dramatic X it seems una(void)able

you can actually drool while watching a telenovela
for no more than 20 seconds nothing flat there
only the way women should look here at home
on my street
in my bed
on the couch
no but
your headache soothes you as you sleep and I am burdened to think too much on one thing for two long

to times too (x) two many times down this road alone

cheap *

as if in this town this gray town with inhabitants inho
                                spit
able pinks dotted like may(flowers

across a dying ocean should alight upon my balding brain a wish for a way to lead to way
then I should no more than pass this way than pass away

dragon? fly me -the MOOn

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (07-13-2002 06:27 PM).]

Music Maker
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 152
THE ORIGINAL !!!!

1 posted 2002-07-13 04:53 PM

Hey Walt !!!
Wanna share some of whatever it is you are on??!! Unless of course it is for medicinal purposes.
Nice one.
Kind thoughts
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2002-07-13 05:08 PM

This poem certainly is way out Walt!!!  As soon as my head stops squirming from my repercussions of reading your mind boggling poem, I might get  around to giving you a

                                                      5 (high five)

on this one..........

"Good Job on This One!!!!"

-Bob

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (07-13-2002 05:10 PM).]

Pip
Member

since 2001-09-14

Posts 59

3 posted 2002-07-13 07:32 PM

Very interesting! There is enough play for many readings.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-07-13 09:15 PM

I like this new style and is has the advantage of no one being able to correct the spelling or grammar.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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