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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am the sort that greets a wall I stand there, and I say hello... I see the concrete depth of dwell... I pat congratulations-GO... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Cold hands means a warm heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grin...if ya keep offering that thumb? I just may take you up on it! (trying to figure the scale here...tsk...any way I look at it? IT'S A DAMNED BIG THUMB!)  (thank ya lovie!) |
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Pip Member
since 2001-09-14
Posts 59 |
Laughing too much at that last comment there, k. hehe I haven't much use for talking to them, but I do stare at walls all of the time. *grins* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I can't talk to walls, there's too much temptation to leave a message and get back to it later. Cool write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Kept coming to this, have it memorized in my head now and keep reciting it. Had to leave something. Believe I do something similar, but am running in two different directions with the last line. Won't bother to explain because it's just my lowly take on your gifted words. Enjoyed this K, and so much more from you that I haven't left my print on. *Peace. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sister K...great observation. Make that wall move. Brought to mind a wall in a town back in CA...people chew gum and leave "gum messages"...and the huge wall is covered with bits and pieces of 'Kilroy was here' sentiments...and there are special cans strictly for the use of wadded up gum wrappers.... not only does that wall talk...but I think it tingles with every applied bit of chewed gum.... thanks for the memory.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Karilea's reply! This one really makes you come back and read again and again yanno? But you speak of walls and I keep thinking rocks and what I can write on them...lol. Good stuff here Karen.. Makes a person stop and ponder.. I love that! Pondering I mean..not stopping, well, that too... Oh dear, I'm starting to ramble so early in the morn. Excellent write m'dear! I'f off....POOF!! ~Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, I drown in the depths of this well, excellent  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I thought you were talkin' about my head! Boy was I relieved. Smiling cause I talk to veggies all the time and can relate. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you.  and, for the record? I HAVE seen walls move--but generally they just close in on me... yuk. yuk. yuk. sigh. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
me too  sometimes they sway.... lol  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grinnin' again if I keep promoting myself on dear Grinch's threads, I'm gonna owe him advertising $$. Love ya Sea, and love you, too, sweet Grinch. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I thought it was great, it was one of yours I clearly had missed....and that is no bueno..I enjoy reading you too much love you back lady  |
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