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serenity blaze
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0 posted 07-13-2002 12:07 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze


I am the sort
that greets a wall
I stand there, and I say hello...
I see the concrete depth
of dwell...
I pat congratulations-GO...
© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 07-13-2002 12:15 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 07-13-2002 12:19 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

grin...if ya keep offering that thumb? I just may take you up on it! (trying to figure the scale here...tsk...any way I look at it? IT'S A DAMNED BIG THUMB!)



(thank ya lovie!)
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3 posted 07-13-2002 07:35 PM       View Profile for Pip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pip

Laughing too much at that last comment there, k.  hehe

I haven't much use for talking to them, but I do stare at walls all of the time.  *grins*
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I can't talk to walls, there's too much temptation to leave a message and get back to it later.
Cool write
Kethry

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5 posted 07-14-2002 09:06 AM       View Profile for Alicia   Email Alicia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicia

~Kept coming to this, have it memorized in my head now and keep reciting it. Had to leave something. Believe I do something similar, but am running in two different directions with the last line. Won't bother to explain because it's just my lowly take on your gifted words. Enjoyed this K, and so much more from you that I haven't left my print on. *Peace.
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Sister K...great observation.  Make that wall move.  Brought to mind a wall in a town back in CA...people chew gum and leave "gum messages"...and the huge wall is covered with bits and pieces of 'Kilroy was here' sentiments...and there are special cans strictly for the use of wadded up gum wrappers....

not only does that wall talk...but I think it tingles with every applied bit of chewed gum....

thanks for the memory....
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Somewhere in time~


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LOL@Karilea's reply!
This one really makes you come back and read again and again yanno?
But you speak of walls and I keep thinking
rocks and what I can write on them...lol.
Good stuff here Karen..
Makes a person stop and ponder..
I love that!
Pondering I mean..not stopping, well, that too...
Oh dear, I'm starting to ramble so early in the morn.
Excellent write m'dear!
I'f off....POOF!!
~Hugs~
Seymour Tabin
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Serenity,
I drown in the depths of this well, excellent
Mark Bohannan
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I thought you were talkin' about my head!  Boy was I relieved.  Smiling cause I talk to veggies all the time and can relate.
serenity blaze
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10 posted 07-14-2002 03:44 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

thank you.

and, for the record? I HAVE seen walls move--but generally they just close in on me...

yuk. yuk. yuk. sigh.
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11 posted 04-02-2009 07:28 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

me too

sometimes they sway.... lol

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12 posted 04-02-2009 08:38 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

grinnin' again

if I keep promoting myself on dear Grinch's threads, I'm gonna owe him advertising $$.

Love ya Sea, and love you, too, sweet Grinch.

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13 posted 04-02-2009 09:25 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I thought it was great, it was one of yours I clearly had missed....and that is no bueno..I enjoy reading you too much

love you back lady
 
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