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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-07-13 07:35 AM


We've Only Just Begun

I can be as romantic
as the next man can.
Deliver a dozen roses and
place gentle kisses
on a woman's hand.

But I would feel like
the worlds biggest jerk
if I failed to tell you
that building a relationship
is a lot of work.

Yes after the kisses
and after the fun
that's when you will
realize that you've
only just begun.

JamesLee
July12
2002

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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-07-13 07:39 AM


Takes a bumpy road to learn this smooth lesson but the bumps are there by design, to slow us down. Enjoyed
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-07-13 10:19 AM


very true...I like this one James *s
M

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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2002-07-13 10:36 AM


I think if you always remember that, you will have a happy life with her.
Hugs
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-07-13 12:23 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I wish you and Jin the greatest happiness together and for each day to be only the beginning of a long true joy! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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