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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2002-07-13 06:58 AM


Well, I wondered for awhile if I would get to 4,000, but it has finally arrived.I missed you all during my time off, but it has made the pleasure of returning to the Passion's table even greater.I submit this to you, and dedicate it to the 'one' who has given me back my dreams, and a hand to hold along the way...
It's a song, as I am a songwriter, but a song is just music held together by words...and the words give the song it's life...


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

There's always one in your life you can safely run to
There is one who runs to you
No matter where things may lead, far beyond tomorrow
that someone will stand by you...

We all need one who'll be there when the rain is falling
One who'll chase the pain away
That one can open your eyes to the love inside you
so that you can hear them say:

"It's me---I'm the one who loves you
and someday you'll understand
That I---am the one beside you
here's my heart, hold out your hand
You know---I will give you my world
'til our days are finally done
Now you know how I feel
Have no doubt that it's real
Or that I'm your only one"

Dedicated to my Music Maker, the 'one'


Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-13-2002 07:00 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-07-13 07:14 AM



Sunnyone, I do believe I was one of the first to welcome you to Passions?  Well, now I say Congratulations on all that has come to you, and Welcome home...you are so right.  There are words, and there is music, but sometimes it just seems so right, to put the two together....life seems a little fuller when that happens...

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2002-07-13 07:24 AM


Oh, thank you so much, my friend...you always add 'sunshine' into my life!! Yes, and you were the first to welcome me to Passions...I remember, because you encouraged me to make myself at home. Yes, each life is a very special song, with it's own sweet melody.  Thank you again...you make Passions a very special place for all of us here...

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


Music Maker
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THE ORIGINAL !!!!
3 posted 2002-07-13 08:31 AM


Just seen this one!!!, Thank you darling (Blushing!!!)
Luv Ya (Forever and a day)
Hubby, John  XXX


Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

[This message has been edited by Music Maker (07-13-2002 08:31 AM).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
4 posted 2002-07-13 08:43 AM


Sunnyone, it's good to see you back and congratulations on the 4000 th post.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-07-13 08:45 AM


Sunnyone
A lovely song, enjoyed.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2002-07-13 08:58 AM


This is absolutely beautiful.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2002-07-13 09:12 AM


I am envious  of your happiness that spills over into words...and I  say these same words(although in different order but same meaning and of course not in song)every day....wishing someone would believe.

M

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-07-13 10:09 AM


Congratulations on your 4000th Post, Sunnyone!!
So pleased to see you back here!
~Cheers & Hugs, Nancy~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2002-07-13 10:18 AM


Sunny, I'm happy to see you back here, and reading your musical words.
Tell John I said hi, and thanks for making my friend sing
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-07-13 12:21 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, we are all soooooooo proud of you, sweet friend, CONGRATULATIONS ON 4000, your contributions and love to us all is wonderful and we are all so blessed to have a true friend like you in all our hearts! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, may you forever be singing songs together with your love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
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11 posted 2002-07-13 12:30 PM


Music Maker
Without you, the song would never be as complete...thank you, in many ways...

Kethry
Thank you, my friend, and it is really good to be back amongst those I think of as family!

Seymore
I thank you so much for joining me here, and so glad you enjoyed the song...

SmartChick
It's always good to make new friends, and I consider you one......thank you!!

nakdthoughts
There will be one who believes, as your heart was not meant to sing alone...
You will meet that one, and know what a duet is meant to sound like!!  Thank you!!

Nancy
Oh, thank you so much.  I know that this steppingstone falls on a day that is tragic in many ways.  And as I wrote this, I did not realize that my dear friend was lying in harm's way.  I thank you for sharing this little milestone with me...it means a lot.

Sandra
Yes, I will pass on the message, and it feels good to be home again, after so long away.  As you know, this family means the very world to me, and so do you, lil sis.  Thank you and


Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-13-2002 12:31 PM).]

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12 posted 2002-07-13 05:51 PM


I wish I could hear you sing that as it sounds like love suits you.  This was simply beautiful, and I also want to thank you for your comment on my poem about my friend last night, as that too was a spsecial kind of love of friendship that is worth singing about!  It is so very nice that you have come back and on such a sad day in her, even your name helps my mood some.  Thank you for sharing your new love with us, it was truly lovely.


Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.

     Howdy from Canada

Marsha
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13 posted 2002-07-13 07:50 PM


Sunny darling sister of my heart and keeper of the stars incandescent shine, this reflection of your soul is one of the best, the very best I’ve ever read by you. You have in this wonderful flow of words written your heart, shown me a glimpse of the soul that lies within wrapped in love and touched by harmony. In this utterly perfect poem you’ve excelled yourself yet again. This is indeed something special since it shows the view of you that was and what now is, it reveals your soul dressed in beauty’s gown The lines of this delight are superb, truly awesome. Yet again you’ve written something that will stand through all time and sing the words of your souls triumph.

This is truly exquisite writing and I love it love it love it utterly. As always darling heart YOU are perfection personified and I love it

CONGRATULATIONS
4,000 WELL DONE


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

mycafe
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Posts 584

14 posted 2002-07-13 10:10 PM


Hi Sunnyone, first of all, happy 4000th posting!! And you've greeted us with such wonderful writing.  In life, it's great to know there's always someone we can run to, and being someone who can be counted on too as well.

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Madame Chipmunk
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Posts 8296
Michigan
15 posted 2002-07-13 11:09 PM


Congratulations Sunnyone....
40000 posts........excellent!
I love your poem about your husband...
it reminds me of how I feel about mine.
~ spinning hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Sunnyone
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Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
16 posted 2002-07-14 01:29 AM


Mysteria
There is a melody that goes with it, that John is helping me put together on the puter. Thank you for all the nice things you just said, and yes, I will always believe that special bonds in this life are not broken by death. They are simply too strong. Thank you for sharing this with me!!

Mushy
Oh, thank you ever so much, and I say that because you saw right into the very depths of what I was trying to show in this one. Reaching a goal is wonderful, but being able to share my happiness with my family here is the warmest feeling in the world!  Thankyou, sister of mine!!

mycafe
Oh yes, I do so agree with you. I mean, you can have the world at your back door, but if you don't have anyone you can trust in times of trouble or pain, what good is it all then?
Thank you so much...

Lyra
It is always nice to see others who share the same kind of special relationship in marriage that I have found in mine. In this day and age, it's a gift, one for which I have searched my entire life. Thank you for your best wishes, and also for sharing your happiness too!!

Hugs and to everyone!!


Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-14-2002 01:30 AM).]

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
17 posted 2002-07-14 10:42 AM


Sorry I am late but CONGRATS with belated wishes fond.  Beautiful things come out of you when you find happiness and you KNOW I am smiling big for you.  Wonderful song filled with beautiful lyrics of sentiment.  
Duncan
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18 posted 2002-07-15 12:33 PM


"It's me---I'm the one who loves you
and someday you'll understand
That I---am the one beside you
here's my heart, hold out your hand
You know---I will give you my world
'til our days are finally done
Now you know how I feel
Have no doubt that it's real
Or that I'm your only one"

Heartfelt vow...the music of love!  btw...like your sig.

CocoBaci
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Posts 3043

19 posted 2002-07-15 01:38 AM


Ohhhhh SweetSunny1, I'm soooo very happy you are back and I just luv these lyrics...
Congratz PoetFriend on 4,000th...
My heart hugz ya
*~coco~*

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
20 posted 2002-07-15 01:51 AM


Oh this is my kind of song!!!
I absolutely loved your lyrics Sunnyone...
and believe it or not I could
hear the music playing.  

Just beautiful and congrats on your 4000th post!!  Boy, I have a long way to go!     

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
21 posted 2002-07-15 04:33 AM


Mark
Thank you for that wonderful smile, and here's one coming right back at ya!!

Duncan
Oh, the music of love can be the saddest or the sweetest, and I'm happy to say that it sounds like an angel's chorus to me these days!!  Thank you!!

Coco
You've always been very supportive of my writings here at Passions, and now I thank you for being here once again!! You're a good friend...

BluesSerenade
Don't worry, my friend, the time just rushes by when you are sharing it here at the family table!!  Thank you for joining me here to tip the glass in celebration!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


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