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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-13 06:37 AM

Love-Touched

I am immersed in your Darkness,
harboring a love that keeps slipping.
Its aura, sometimes an illusion
unfolding from the shadows.
Over time I have crossed boundaries
moved by silence, confined by shattered dreams,
a love created in my mind,
caught within the portals of darkness,
stilled by the reflections of the past.

Under closed eyes, vast waves rock me,
whet my thoughts, possess my body,
anchoring me to remnants of you.
I am forever bound in fragments of time,
memories sweet, dimensions of two.

I am impressionable,
create within my heart and mind
that which rises and descends upon my days.
I am within a mist of light, glowing,
the after effects of wandering
through the deep recesses of my mind,
against night's darkness, as your silence
breathes new life into my world of words.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-13-2002 06:39 AM).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2002-07-13 06:41 AM

Who is to say that love is not but an illusion, one that we hold in our minds, and wish into existence...
This is so very exceptional, my friend, and I applaud you for sharing it with us here...

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-07-13 06:44 AM

It is nice to see you so happy, your new life
suits you well. Thank you

M

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

3 posted 2002-07-13 11:15 AM

Beautiful and haunting are these images GF, very surreal and lovely...wonderful writing here! ((hugs))

PS, the pic is terrific! It looks great!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-07-13 01:22 PM

thanks dulci..sometimes I think my life has been surreal...makes me want to touch everything to see if any of it is true...*s

hugss and thanks for the pic comment..I decided not to smile this time *s
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-13-2002 01:23 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-07-13 03:27 PM

Yes we make a place of acceptance in which love can grow...James

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-07-13 03:30 PM

Maureen, this is beautiful. Surreal is a good word for my life too.
Love the new photo

Sandra

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-07-13 03:40 PM

Thank you James..*s

Sandra, glad to see you....I hope you can come to Marshas Villa in Sept...I am going to try my best to be there...and meet her and the others...Thanks for your comments..I thought I needed to take a newer pic of me since I keep hearing what BIG HAIR I have *s..which I don't..I guess my other picture's background gave that appearance *s

hugss
M

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-07-13 08:13 PM

Maureen darling heart this is simply exquisite, I love it when your words are wrapped in such soft and delicate wings of wonder. Mmmmm this is just too delicious for words. And again you fly my mind into fairyland where dreams are sprinkled with starlight and moonlight is reflected back inside dreamers song.

How beautiful the flow and the ease of this delight and as always darling heart your words shine like no other. Do I love this? YES YES YES I love it utterly utterly utterly. Beautifully written and perfectly presented. As I said this is exquisite

I love the new photo it makes you look positively stunning, as I know you are. Your face darling heart reflect the beauty of your soul both of which are revealed in all the words you write and in this in particular. Beautiful darling heart utterly beautiful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-07-13 08:14 PM

Nice. very nice

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2002-07-13 08:31 PM

Maureen, this is so lovely and surreal, it reminded me strongly of the speech in Labyrinth. You know "through dangers untold and hardships unnumbered..." fabulous writing.
Kethry
PS see you in September

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

11 posted 2002-07-13 10:03 PM

Maureen, this is awesome writing, every word flows smoothly and wonderfully. Loved these lines...
"I am forever bound in fragments of time,
memories sweet, dimensions of two."

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2002-07-13 10:20 PM

Under closed eyes, vast waves rock me,
whet my thoughts, possess my body,
anchoring me to remnants of you.
I am forever bound in fragments of time,

Just beautiful Maureen...it's hard to hold on and let go much less find that common ground. Not to say that paradise doesn't exist, I guess it's a matter of getting on the right boat!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

13 posted 2002-07-13 10:20 PM

M...

beautiful writing from your pen once
again...something though that I've come
to expect...your heart glows in this...
you are very pretty by the way!
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-07-13 10:22 PM

(smiles) Oh Maureen, your poetry has been so upbeat lately, I'm so happy for you and your new found joy! (kiss on cheek) By the way, I love your new picture too, this is a delightful poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

15 posted 2002-07-13 11:11 PM

hey!
who is that fox in the photo???
Makes me want to be a hunting dawg

ok, smack...that was uncalled for (ribbin' ya)
but wanted to let you know how intelligently
presented this piece of master was. Love
is a crumbling and rebuilding process at best,
but until they invent something to replace it.....*grin*

Take care, Maur,
Jeff

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

16 posted 2002-07-14 08:24 PM

I am speechless!

That is one of the most beautifully written poems I have ever read. The words flowed, the poem flowed. The picure you painted with words never stumbled. It was beautiful. I'd offer a critique, but nothing worth mentioning was found in this much enjoyed piece.

Sincerely,
Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

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