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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-07-13 03:26 AM




Homerun
Touchdown
Checkered flag
Score
Hole in one
Ace
Goal
Finish line
Blue ribbon
First
Loved

Have I mentioned today that I love you?

© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-07-13 03:33 AM


and just the sound
of love in verse,
burst of chest
in lifted curse--
pride in surge
of finish line...
break the ribbon!
Trophy shines.

You two make me smile.

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
2 posted 2002-07-13 03:52 AM



Ain't the game of love just wonderful?

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Music Maker
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THE ORIGINAL !!!!
3 posted 2002-07-13 04:26 AM


Superb!!!
First in every way.   So few words, so full a description.
Kind thoughts.
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2002-07-13 06:18 AM


Love has a way of making us the winners!!  This is great, Duncan, and may there always be checkered flags in your life!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2002-07-13 11:32 AM


Nice way to feel, and well deserved, I think.
Sandra

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
6 posted 2002-07-13 11:46 AM


Wow, that good huh??? Ain’t you a sweetheart??? Ain’t life great??? Ain’t love even better??? Love ya babe.

P.S.  Does this mean the war of the sig’s is over????

No you didn't. WAKE UP AND TELL ME!!!!

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2002-07-13 01:43 PM


*smiling at you and your heart on sleeve brevity*


you forgot blonde and forgetful lol

you just made succinct sincere

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much ...
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch.

J.Browne

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-07-13 01:49 PM


Wonderful Duncan!
Good to see the two of you have changed your sigs.
That is a good thing, no?
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2002-07-13 01:51 PM


Dunc,
Sounds like your dunkin doughnuts again. LOL
Good write.

the_loner_23
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10 posted 2002-07-13 01:57 PM


I like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-07-13 02:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, may your love forever make you feel like a sduperstar at the top of the world! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands
12 posted 2002-07-13 02:30 PM


BINGO!!!!

Neeraja

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
13 posted 2002-07-13 10:56 PM


It's nice to win instead of being an honorable mention!  Glad to see you on top of your game Duncan~  (no pun intended, I mean that sincerely)  Liked this a lot!!!


Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
14 posted 2002-07-13 11:05 PM


Its so good to see you happy again, Duncan.
I really enjoy these winning type words of yours.
~ hugs of happiness

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Alicia
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15 posted 2002-07-13 11:06 PM


~WooHoo! Dynamite! *Peace poet.
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