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akira
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since 2002-07-13
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Idaho

0 posted 2002-07-13 02:08 AM




Lifes lessons


Life’s lessons of mercy passing me by
Life’s lessons on joy passing me by
Life’s lessons of love passing me by

My life is empty
My life is lonely
My life is hollow

You’re alone too
You’re lost too
You’re scared too

Why are we alone in this world?
Why is life passing us by?
Why are we trying to survive?

If life has no point
If life has no meaning
If life has no value

Then why live in the suffering
Then why live in the pain
Then why live in the sorrow

This world is tearing me apart
This world is driving me insane
This world is torchuring my soul

My thoughts beyone my control
My memories driving me to the brink of insanity
My mind trapped and tortured

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira

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1 posted 2002-07-13 02:19 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Felicity, this is so very sad, sweet friend, yet so powerful, I love the emphasis of your criesd here by the use of repetition, it echoes with great volume! (sigh) I know how hard it must feel to be alone, but believe me, while the meaning of life may feel vague now, soon many promises will be made for you and lifes joys will be yours, just keep believing in yourself! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Felicity, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

akira
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since 2002-07-13
Posts 79
Idaho
2 posted 2002-07-13 02:23 AM


Thank you for you replies...i'm posted on other forums....its nice to have someone tell me i'm doing things right..i so often feel as though i'm messing up and stumbling around in this world...at times its as though i'm lost and dont know what to do...

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira

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