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akira
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0 posted 2002-07-13 12:58 PM




I Am A Single Rose


I am a single rose, a twin who has lost her other
I wonder if she knows that fate was wrong
I hear her voice calling out to me beckoning my soul
I see her standing before me, calling out to me saying,
"come I am here"
I want to comfort her, to tell her I care that I love her
I am a single rose, a twin who has lost her other.

I pretend she is here by my side, that fate has not played its ungly hand.
I feel her soul surrounding me, enclosing me in its light
I touch her mind and she becomes one with me.
I worry she cannot sense me, that she has forgotten who I am
I cry for she is not here; fate has taken her from me
I am a single rose, a twin who has lost her other.

I understand she is inside my soul, her mind dwells with me
I say that life is a gift that should be given to all and no man may take from another.
I dream that someday she will return in the flesh for her soul is already here.
I try to forget the pain of losing her, the hurt of not having her here.
I am a single rose, a twin who has lost her other

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1 posted 2002-07-13 01:35 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Felicity, this brought tears to my eyes reading this, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your loss, this is a powerfully heartfelt debut! We all have feelings as you do and here we will be happy to compassionately reach out to you through the written word! Welcome to Passions, sweet Felicity, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Felicity, thank you for sharing!

  

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

akira
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since 2002-07-13
Posts 79
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2 posted 2002-07-13 01:59 AM


Thank you friend...i'm 19 and trying to get the word out and have people read my work...
the poem "I am a single rose" was written after i found out my mother had an abortion that killed my twin sister...but left me alive...(this is a true story) she chose to keep me after hearing that the abortion hadn't killed me...i was born 3lbs 13oz and almost died in the hospital....i would love for others to read the rest of my poetry...i have alot...to share...and would love to hear from others....

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira

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