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Senryu for Sleep
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Senryu for Sleep |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Senryu for Sleep Fingertip moon, star Quarter to ten blue night sky Peace, thy name is God |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
"Fingertip moon" I love the image this presents. Wonderful Haiku!!! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love the beautiful image of this poem, sweet friend, it had me imagining touching a star before I fall alseep of falling in love with my Joanna and her smile was like a twinkling star which made me sigh and fall asleep! (sigh) This is a lovely lullabye, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
me likes this! time for me to snuggle up in bed |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Will this work in place of a sleeping pill?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
(yawn) G'night.... She said burn ... together. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Touch of midnight blue caught in harmony of peace Palm of God revealed |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I just love this, Sunshine...it is so peaceful, and exquisite in it's form!!  Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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