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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-12 11:07 PM


Like crimson eyelids, curtains fall
The stage recedes from view
The final act of love has played
And now must bid adieu

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-12 11:14 PM




(sigh) This is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, it saddened me to see the love lost in the end yet the afterglow remains and would never be forgotten! (sigh) This is a lovely poem as all your wonderful ones are, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-07-12 11:14 PM


It is short and sweet. But I always enjoy.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-07-15 12:20 PM


This poem is great.... you've captured the emotion/power (??) into so fee words.... I really enjoyed this ..
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4 posted 2002-07-16 03:34 PM


I will never get tired of your work, Kris. I love it. Your style is fresh, and original (in my opinion), but also talented, and superbly done. This piece is another shining example of that.

Sincerely,
Titus


As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (07-16-2002 03:35 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-07-16 03:36 PM


I love the way you can say so much with so few words, Kris...
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-07-16 04:31 PM


Nice writing...James
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7 posted 2002-07-16 05:08 PM


oh my, you have such a way with these short ones, simple beautiful!!!

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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