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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2002-07-12 10:41 PM





Your Whisper

I can feel your
whisper dance across the
curves of my heart, warming my
senses as I get lost in your gift of love.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-12 10:42 PM


That was beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-12 10:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may loves whispers always sing to your heart and make you happy forever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2002-07-13 02:15 AM


Dancing on those curves can be a tricky thing.  He must be REAL Good. Enjoyed the sentiments in this one.
akira
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4 posted 2002-07-13 02:20 AM


great poem...i love it....its so sweet...and tender....

Akira
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Sunnyone
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5 posted 2002-07-13 06:37 AM


So very sensual, deep, yet lingering. Like an exotic perfume that is still there, filling the spirit with pleasure....great writing here.......

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


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6 posted 2002-07-13 09:56 PM




I am glad you all liked it. My muse
is not that kind anymore.
It's nice to know that
some people are
still reading.


[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (07-13-2002 09:57 PM).]

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