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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-12 08:10 PM




Petals of the rose you sent and more,
perfume and passion mixed,
the scent of ambrosia's mist.
I breathed deeply of you,
filled my senses
…you.

Answering to yearnings
I touched the petal to my lips,
sipped the merest essence,
filled my desire…
… you.
My eyes went green to emerald
Placing the rose upon my tongue,
I closed my eyes, opened my mind,
filled my love…
… you.
Filled me….
… you.

aloha... with warm regards

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-07-12 08:18 PM


roses love and closeness - powerfully woven together in this beautiful poem - Paul
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-07-12 08:24 PM


...Exquisite!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-07-12 08:26 PM


stunning images, welcome to Passions
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2002-07-12 08:34 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo sweet, dearest friend, my love goes by the name RosePetal here on Passions and every time I say her beautiful name to myself I feel so mushy just dreaming of handing her a rose and sharing my first kiss with her! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
5 posted 2002-07-13 02:01 PM


thanks for commenting on my scribbles...I like this one as it is a daydream of sorts...Just lovved getting roses for the first time....aloha, Cher

aloha... with warm regards

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