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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-12 06:46 PM


These words of love I write
Stand so proudly on the page
They speak of a love so timeless
Something from a by gone age

Images of knights in armour
Helping maidens in distress
The touch of a velvet hand
Memories of that first caress

A different place in time
In the days when love was grand
A lover serenaded on a balcony
As two hearts take full command

Stolen kisses beneath the moonlight
The fragrant smell of honey dew
The whispers in the wind
As my heart calls out to you

Some dream of a love so perfect
But I need dream no more
For I am so lucky to have found
The love I was searching for

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-12 07:06 PM


Sue:  Lovely poem and I'm so glad you found that one perfect love!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2002-07-12 07:13 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always sooooooo enchantingly romantic as we are all so blessed to have such a wonderful friend like you! (kiss on cheek) May your love always make all your dreams come true, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-07-12 07:39 PM


your images of the words and images of love are so powerful - thanks for allowing us into the feelings of this powerful emotion - Paul
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4 posted 2002-07-14 01:54 AM


Sue,
A gentle bump for a lovely poem. Thanks once again.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 2002-07-14 02:00 AM


Cute. I like. actually I love it.
Music Maker
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THE ORIGINAL !!!!
6 posted 2002-07-14 03:10 AM


Sue,
What a beautiferous sentiment, what deep love and joy you express so elequently.
Just want to say, I wish I had your power of word from thought to express my feeleings for my loved one.
Kind thoughts, and thank you
from
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

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