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4 am Serenade
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4 am Serenade |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Tempers Flair She’s got bright red hair, A taunt mouth and icy stare, Better not cross her I wouldn’t dare. He comes home, Skunk drunk to the bone, Stumbling across the loose stone, Singing way off tone, But alone. At the door, Met there once more, So loose he can’t even pour, Falls down as before, Close the door. Gloom |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LOL  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
obviously this is one woman I can understand wonder what would happen if my hair was red... I don't think I would even like to know |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the presentation, Professor...and the underlying message...well done, Sir... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
another slice of life aptly portrayed by your pen---this one made me check the house for hidden cameras tho!  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerful hard edged poetry - well written - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh aszard, this is such a powerful melancholy piece, sweet firend, my heart goes out to all who drown their spirits in alcohol and drugs and I hope they can find a recovery and rise again! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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