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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-07-12 12:46 PM

boneman shuffles his bravado
swagger walking some fixed way
long keys rattle frisson spill
grating blades for spineless pay

he stops beside the dance hall daughter,
lifts her sleeves and trys the key
it doesn't fit, she lives the night
he swashes on again to fill his need

on gravel music, the tracked man kneels
cooking stones on tin for his skin
tomb stone eyes with blind man gape
another key is tried, silence then sirens

"his spirit is lifted," the boneman japes

©Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-12-2002 12:55 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-12 12:48 PM

WHOA...from the dark side indeed...
some amazing words, and some grave imagery...

well done, Sir...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-12 12:52 PM

You are turning to the darkside. Very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-07-12 12:52 PM

ms sun' thanks lady friend, gem n i fight over which side is going to do the writing sometimes....I am bigger but he knows when I sleep.

loner ...no not going to spend much time there...(I hope) but some things sneak out, thanks for the eyes

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-12-2002 12:54 PM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-07-12 01:09 PM

DS

You have a few keys...I'm sure they fit in many places. Enjoyed this look at you.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2002-07-12 01:23 PM

ms martie, thanks lil lady....hope it is coolin down there? is almost freezin here..(he he)(lil lie)

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

6 posted 2002-07-12 01:59 PM

Your views are sooo real. I'm glad that I live in the country..but then..there are things here too. Can't run from this boogey man..

Sincerely,
Reg

GoddessofHell
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since 2002-07-09

Posts 76

7 posted 2002-07-12 02:09 PM

Amazing use of words.
Enjoyed.

Heather

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2002-07-12 03:24 PM

ms regina

thanks babe for living here
and having the soft spread
for a heart sandwhich..
makes u a nice kid!!

goddess ms thanks for your read and reply, much appreciated

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2002-07-12 06:49 PM

The art of a poet and the poetry in the artist comes in many shades and you wear the shade of dark as gracefully as you do the oranges and yellows. Excellent penning indeed.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-07-12 06:59 PM

BRAVO!!! Wow, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I am always impressed by your versatile style of your words, this is excellent and shines with the thoughts of darkness, I LOVE IT, this is a unique style for you, we all love you so much, kudos to you!!!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2002-07-13 09:50 AM

love the dark side of you, you should sleep and leak more often.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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