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daftly put aside
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daftly put aside |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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daftly put aside like glasses forgotten on the head like somebody else’s dreams digressed into a loiter stranded between the rock and the stream tacitly tainted like the translucence of grey area almost as if reinventing silence and trying to hear its echo |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I like your words, Sudhir. They blend beautifully! *s When you think you have read it all, |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, as ever a lovely poem Sudhir... I haven't read anything by you in ages, I now remember why I rated your poems so well  .L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir Iyer Good one I like. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir, there is no way you are re-inventing silence unless it's from my amazed lips at the wonder of your words. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderful words to cascade over my mind - thanks for a wonderful poem - I liked it! Paul |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir Thoughtfilled and interesting, with beautiful flow. Thank you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all, my dear friends... Regards, sudhir |
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