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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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Sunset surrenders radiant hues Golden flash to velvet horizon Warming me with promises of tomorrow In the deafening solitude of stillness of night Seeking the keys of love and life Ponderings of past, questioning the future Memories, and dreams flooding the chambers of my heart A ripple of a stone cast upon the waters of time Reflections of love, remembering a child’s daydreams Hidden in the dark of night For so long I guarded my heart Treasures locked securely in hidden chambers A prison of solitary confinement Another casualty of love gone aground Shipwrecked on a sea of lonliness Then……….. there was you Trust rebirthed in love Key to my heart in your capable hands Unlocking dreams and faith Fantasies became reality, passions unbridled. With the radiance of dawns new light I am reminded of the bond we share Your tender words comforts me As the morning star shines with new hope Finally I know what it means to be a woman A woman in bloom.......... aloha... with warm regards |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!! well you opened up your petals towards the sun and bloomed...thats for sure  This poem is beautiful and the ending so uplifting and romantic...excellent write, well done. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
So much emerges from this work - Your poetic talent, happiness with the one you love, but most of all a beautiful mind. Lets have some more PLEASE !!!! Grass won't grow under feet that don't move. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You certainly paint a lovely picture-- Much enjoyed. *s When you think you have read it all, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CSKpoet A lovely and delightfil read. Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Simply delightlful~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
CSKpoet This was simply elegant. Nice to know a "woman in bloom." Beautiful. Garfield |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"A woman in bloom..." There's a whole new poem just begging for your pen, there, and it will be as light and graceful as this gift... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is so special - just full of insight into the awakening experience you share - wow I loved it - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are a wonderful woman and friend in bloom and we are all so lucky to watch you grow and smile through the lovely words you write! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
CSK, you are a poet and this was stunningly expressed. write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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