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Music Maker
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since 2002-07-07
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THE ORIGINAL !!!!

0 posted 2002-07-12 06:27 AM



This is my first submission to the group. I really joined the group to READ Poetry, and try to understand and learn in order to share my wife's passion! (She is 'SunnyOne'). Over the last few days I have been a frequent visitor to the site, and I feel that you all need a smile - so here goes:-

MANS PHILOSOPHY!
I like the girls who do,
I like the girls who don't.
I hate the girls who say they will,
and then they say they won't.
But the girl I like the best of all
- I'm sure you'll say I'm right.
Is the girl who says she never does,
but looks as though she might!!


After this, I am sure you will all tell me to stick to writing music, and to leave the poetry to the poets.

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

© Copyright 2002 John Haddleton - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-07-12 06:34 AM



Welcome to Passions, John!  You've joined for one of the best reasons ever, to see why your new wife is always smiling!  Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting, AND...don't stop writing music OR poetry.  You never know where it may take you!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


RSWells
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2 posted 2002-07-12 06:37 AM


Welcome, your entry offering might suggest you as a candidate for the many challenges which appear in this friendly place.
tracie66
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3 posted 2002-07-12 06:38 AM




Welcome to passions

well I thought this was so cute and amusing, I don't mind if you write more poetry and look forward to other writes from you.
well done~

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Music Maker
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 152
THE ORIGINAL !!!!
4 posted 2002-07-12 06:53 AM


Sunshine - RSWells - Tracie66.
Thank you for your encouragement and kind words - perhaps if you drop by to my Web page, you will enjoy what I do best - Writing music.   I hope you will listen to some of my compositions and arrangements and enjoy my way of expressing feelings.
Kind thoughts,
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-07-12 12:06 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh John, this is such a sensational debut, sweet friend, yes, keep writing this wonderful oetry and please share your music lyrics with us too, I am so happy Sunnyone introduced you here, she is a wonderful friend like you are, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet John, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
6 posted 2002-07-12 12:09 PM


Welcome to passions.

I throughly enjoyed this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
7 posted 2002-07-12 12:11 PM


keep them coming , this one I enjoyed
Hope

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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8 posted 2002-07-12 01:40 PM


Welcome to passions Music Maker!  I am rather new here myself and I like it here!

I liked your poem very much!  It is so good to laugh!!!

Thanks!

Neeraja

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Canada eh.
9 posted 2002-07-12 02:09 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very enjoyable first post!
I do hope you will come by more often..
I will be looking for more posts from you!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie
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10 posted 2002-07-12 02:13 PM


Welcome to Passions, Music Maker...your poem brought me a smile.
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