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mycafe
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0 posted 2002-07-12 04:08 AM


The Trash in My Heart

An existence of bad remains
Lingers on as stark memories
For though in a trash I place
I have not really emptied it



© Copyright 2002 Marie C - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-07-12 06:49 AM



Ack!  Get rid of it!  Empty it, and call the exterminators.  Can't be having that "stuff" lay around!  Not healthy!

angelswing
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2 posted 2002-07-12 09:40 AM


Empty the trash and you will feel better ... eigher that or get someone else to empty it for you ! . Great poem .
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nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-07-12 01:16 PM


good one..I am emptying the trash daily. trying to catch up...but it won't be much longer and then all will be gone..ahhh  waiting for the freshness of new.

M

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-07-12 02:08 PM


It's trash day...take that stuff out!!!


You wanna tell 'em about the mmmmmm sound or should I?

Star T
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5 posted 2002-07-12 06:15 PM


i know what u mean.even when we think we've moved on i.e emptied the trash,we really arent that sure cos somehow its still lingering there.keep up the good work!
SmartChick
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6 posted 2002-07-12 06:19 PM


Sometimes, it is so hard to get rid of bad memories. Just when you think they are gone, they pop right back up again.
Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2002-07-12 06:56 PM


If you recycle it and make something useful of it, then it no longer sits as trash.  Nice little verse with alot of STUFF in it.
Kethry
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8 posted 2002-07-12 07:04 PM


mycafe,
I understand the echoes of trash, the only way to empty completely is to keep refilling with new things.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-07-12 07:29 PM




(smiles) Oh Marie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, always rid of what makes you sad and always fill your heart with pretty gardens and blessings of flowers! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiul heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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10 posted 2002-07-12 07:37 PM


don't we all need a deleted files place where we put stuff and then periodically we empty it and it is mostly gone - thanks for the powerful poem with so much to ponder - Paul
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11 posted 2002-07-12 07:52 PM


Egad!  Empty the trash!
Get rid of it....quickly.
~Hugs~

Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-07-13 12:42 PM


Excellent write, Marie...
but into the recycling bin with the trash in your heart.  Maybe it will be someone else's treasure.
~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

kaile
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13 posted 2002-07-21 10:36 PM


Marie,
indeed! while we may move on, it doesn't mean that the void doesn't tag along...something that i'm sure most of us can relate to...

life is too short for unhappiness though..so smile

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