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Open Poetry #21

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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-07-11 11:44 PM

lift your eyes higher upon the
stained glass fantasy that
fractures the evening sky
from testements of frailty,
when noticed for a moment
the gleam with candor
your tears becoming unoticed
make room for the sudden joy
of a flight of sunbeams
streaming down, falling
on tense shoulders that
collapse under the strain of being,
the one failed attempt at life
can be forgotten, a learned
hold out of temptations
that lead you to transition

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-11 11:46 PM

I like this poem. Good work

Cold hands means a warm heart

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2002-07-12 09:10 AM

Wow, this poem works on so many levels it's so deep, I had to read it twice to fully take it in and enjoy it... When I did though, I loved it; great poem .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-07-13 09:27 PM

Enjoyed the transition and the message you sent. With each step there is a lesson to learn, whether we're moving forwards or backwards....at least we're moving!

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

4 posted 2002-07-15 05:37 PM

You always could transcend me anywhere.

Love,
Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

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