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Sitting in the Car
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Sitting in the Car |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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I am sitting in the car Turning on the air Wasting gas without a care It is hot outside I decided to go for a ride Thinking about life And how in the future I want to be a loving wife Now I am at a park Sitting in my car Thinking how far I want to travel Maybe to Canada But all I can do is sit in my car And not drive far What a bummer!!! Cold hands means a warm heart [This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (07-11-2002 10:17 PM).] |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I like the poem. It describes what I feel in life when I'm not adventuring or at least imagining adventure. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is a wonderful thoughtful poem, sweet friend, it is a strange feeling indeed yet we can go far if we believe in it with our hearts! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Now I am at a park Sitting in my car Thinking how far I want to travel Maybe to Canada Wanna carpool? How many redheads will it take to get one little puppy to class? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
One of these days, Canada would be a great place to go. I'll let you drive, and I'll share the gas money, okay? I love your poem. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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