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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-11 09:07 PM



Changes strike beyond the peace
And wake the calm desire
Lights of stay will laugh of hopes
Our love will burn like fire

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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1 posted 2002-07-11 09:10 PM


with poetry like that the flames will indeed burn eternally - very well written poetry - I really enjoyed it - Paul
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2 posted 2002-07-11 09:11 PM



Kris, I think you need a longer pencil...these are like peanuts and I always want more!

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Cali
3 posted 2002-07-11 10:04 PM


Hope wills the flame to kiss each candle goodnight...

you sure do inspire me sometimes!!!

Take care Kris!!!

hugs from me~
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-07-11 10:12 PM


Wonderful work

Cold hands means a warm heart

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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2002-07-11 10:32 PM


Love it
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-07-11 11:11 PM


I love how you say so much with so few words and do it so perfectly, Kris...
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2002-07-11 11:22 PM


burn baby...burrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrnnn
Suetang
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8 posted 2002-07-11 11:49 PM


Absolutely stunning!

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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...in my boxers...
9 posted 2002-07-23 02:32 PM


As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2002-07-28 10:03 AM


Kris~
VERY nice~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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