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LWF31407
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0 posted 2002-07-11 07:05 PM



POTA 2K1 (Lengthly)

Space

Experimenting with the simian
as was done by the air force in another movie.
Teaching monkeys to fly planes and spacecraft?
Sounds kinda neat and kinda groovy.

Far from the ship

The monkeyship had straayed too far,
In Danger was the monkeyship.
Out Goes Leo To Bring him in
But Hold On, FOR FORTHCOMING - BAD TRIP!

Time Warp -

A bend in time and Leo transported to planet of simians paranoid
Who enslaved humans for their own purpose. For the future, they they humans would destroy.
Yet there were those of the simijna genre, who the human, indeded could trust.
When you want freedom , compromise you oft have to make , it is indeed a must

General Thade

The Leader of the monkeys was the tyrant f tyrants, the simian general thade
a madman paranoid, emotionless and cruel, the humans he did truly hate.
He was as his Father Old Dr. Zaius, Old Guard, tested tried and to the monkeys true.
Or so it was believed. For a visitor came from out of the sky clear blue

Pericles / Seemos

The God of The Simian, the Chimpanzee Seemos.
Jettisoned earlier into space.
Landed and all the Siminas worshiped him. Except for thade, the disgrace.
Seemos AKA Pericles received Leo the Human as his ow.
recognizing his old pal fro the sky. Heart warmed not cold as stone.

Demise of Thade,

Be ye sure thade for thy sins wil find thee out
Truth of truths without a doubt.
Your attrosity over, the humans and the simians.
Live in peace and live as friends

Reverse Time Warp - Back to Colima

The Time Warp that transported the astronaut to the Apes Globe
Was reversed and back to earth Leo Came
BUT WHEN LEO FOUND OUT WHO GENERAL THADE WAS
UNIMAGINABLE WAS THE PAIN

You're Under Arrest

The Simian Police of Coliima Arrested Leo
for invading their simian land
He was only trying to get back home
Sometimes people and apes just dont understand

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2002-07-11 07:06 PM


That was so cool.

Cold hands means a warm heart

LWF31407
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2 posted 2002-07-11 07:07 PM


TY Loner! Lewis
angelswing
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3 posted 2002-07-12 08:35 AM


Cool, nice tribute to a great book/tv series/film ... I always loved the part when the guy finds out that they're on Earth all along, I can't believe they took that out of the new film ! . Loved it .
L.of.L. Tom .
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