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Unforgiving Grey
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
Unforgiving Grey A fractured silhouette of lies; am I convincing you I'm strong? It seems torn and relentless, the sirens of there laughter. My blood curdles in this loneliness; as my soul grieves for you. Still dragging my cast iron heart, I'm cursed by a splinter of hope, the hours are peeled back to reveal, pages and pages of unforgiving grey. I'm stalked by your shadow, your smile is etched in these tears. Each day is an anniversary, of the first morning I woke alone. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That is so sad. Great write though Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
drips of sadness and reveals powerful emotion - great poetry too - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Daniel, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope this feeling no longer applies to you and if it does I know joy will come to you soon! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
...thanks. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate a great deal to this. |
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