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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-07-11 06:24 PM



For Bar

So, here we are
Obedient to the murmurs of our hearts
Fastidious, in that "we" decided on forever
Touching faith while the world moves on
Looking forward,
Yet remembering from whence we came

Happiness is
Every moment with you
Resplendent, a gift from above
Ever engraved upon all that I am...

~Tier
7/02


"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (07-11-2002 06:27 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-11 06:43 PM


Happiness is a great emotion indeed.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-07-11 06:52 PM



A lovely Acrostic,

Touching
Innovative
Effervescent
Refreshing...

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-07-11 06:52 PM


happy is great as is this poem - thanks Paul
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-07-11 07:06 PM


"Happiness is every moment with you."
Know this feeling...James

vandana
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5 posted 2002-07-11 07:06 PM


ENJOYED
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2002-07-11 08:39 PM


Lovely poem. Enjoyed!

Deb

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7 posted 2002-07-11 08:46 PM




(smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your love is going to love this, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mycafe
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8 posted 2002-07-11 08:53 PM


You've expressed it so softly and gently...loved it, especially the last line !

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Duncan
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9 posted 2002-07-12 12:22 PM


Sure does sound like love!


How many redheads will it take to get one little puppy to class?

bsquirrel
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10 posted 2002-07-12 01:45 PM


Okay, I am finally, finally, FINALLY remembering to click th' "add poet to library" button as I reply to this great poem! Grrr! Took forever!

Mah brain fell ou'...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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